Crime+Scene+Script

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My name is Detective Riley. Two weeks ago I was called to a crime scene on the victim's deck of his 2 bedroom 1 bathroom beach house. The alleged victim was Felix Navidad a very rich man who inharited a lot of money because his parents died in a bunge jump accident.He did not get love in his family and all his friend not not like him well.The suspect guilty of committing this crime is Kendra Goode a women who is suspected of murder because her greed overwelmed her and needed to get rich by Felix Navidad's will.This suspect's guilt was confimed through the testing and results of evidence collected at the crime scene. The most incriminating piece of evidence was the secret note. The evidence was found on a peice of cardborad near the door of the house.The test performed was a way to match handwriting to something like the note this test is called the handwriting test. The results of the test were very incrimanating...I found that Kendra wrote the letter and she tried to frame Vera Cruise but she pressed too hard on the pen/pencil and it seeped through the paper on to the cardborad. This connects the suspect to the crime because it said on it I'm glad it's over. Felix is dead. I'll be rich soon'. The next piece of evidence collected was the fingerprints on the plastic cup. It was found near the body of Felix Naviada. The test performed was to pick up fingerprints and match them to the suspect's fingerprints. On the cups I found Felix's fingerprints and Kendra's fingerprints. (How does this connect her to the crime?) Another peice of evidence is when she said she knew Felix was dead.She said she heard a woman's voice and she went down stairs but Alfrado Fettiuccine was calling for everyone to come see Felix's dead body.This connects the suspect to the crime because she said she heard a women's voice but Alfrado is not a women. Another piece of evidence collected was hair found at the crime scene.It was found on the shirt Kendra was wearing.The test performed was a tape lift.The results of the test were that there was human hair on her shirt.This connects the suspect to the crime because she had hair from a man on her shirt.Also they found a brush with Felix's hair on it.On the brush it said Goode on the side of it. (Other than proving she was in the beach House, how does that connect her to Felix's murder?) According to the evidence, the following is an account of the events believed to have gone down on that fateful day. Felix invited his 4 closest freinds to a house warming party.Everyone went to have a good time but Kendra Goode had other plans.Kendra stole some chemicals from Vera Cruise and put them in Felix's drink (How did she get them in the drink?) .When Alfrado went to the bathroom he drank his drink.After he drank it he died.So when the police came and when everone turned there backs for a moment she took Felix's body and through it in the ocean. Therefore, Kendra Goode committed the crime of murder for money. **Rubric for Podcasts** introduction. Provides relevant information and establishes a clear purpose engaging the listener immediately. || __**Describes the topic and engages the audience as the introduction proceeds.**__ || Somewhat engaging (covers well-known topic), and provides a vague purpose. || Irrelevant or inappropriate topic that minimally engages listener. Does not include an introduction or the purpose is vague and unclear. ||^  || 72% ||
 * ** CATEGORY ** || ** Exemplary **  || ** Proficient **  || ** Partially Proficient **  || ** Incomplete **  || ** POINTS **  ||
 * ** Introduction ** || ** 3 points ** || ** 2 points ** || ** 1 points ** || ** 0 points ** || ||
 * ^  || Catchy and clever
 * ^  || __**Tells who is speaking, date the podcast was produced, and where the speaker is located.**__  || Tells most of the following: who is speaking, date of the podcast, and location of speaker.  || Alludes to who is speaking, date of the podcast, and location of speaker.  || Speaker is not identified. No production date or location of the speaker is provided.  ||^   ||
 * ** Content ** || ** 6 points ** || ** 4 points ** || ** 2 points ** || ** 0 points ** || ||
 * ^  || The motive was detailed and clearly based on information delivered throughout the investigation.  || __**The motive is detailed and based on partial information delivered throughout the investigation.**__  || The motive is not very detailed and is sprinkled with inaccurate information.  || The motive is missing, or unclear or all information is inaccurate.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || Four pieces of strong evidence were presented and linked to the suspect in an organized, methodical manner.  || Three or four pieces of evidence were presented and/or linked to the suspect in a somewhat organized, thoughtful manner.  || __** Two pieces of shaky evidence were presented and/or loosely linked to the suspect. Lack of organization.  **__ || One to no pieces of unimportant evidence were presented in an unorganized manner.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || The events in the scenario are detailed, extremely organized and strongly supported with evidence and facts related to the crime scene.  || The events in the scenario are well organized, somewhat detailed, and supported with evidence from the crime scene. || __**The events in the crime scene lack organization, detail, and are weakly supported with evidence from the crime scene.**__ || There was no clear direction and evidence was unimportant. ||^   ||
 * ^  || Conclusion clearly summarizes key information.  || Conclusion summarizes information.  || __**Conclusion vaguely summarizes key information**__  || No conclusion is provided.  ||^   ||
 * ** Delivery ** || ** 3 points ** || ** 2 points ** || ** 1 point ** || ** 0 points ** || ||
 * ^  || __**Well rehearsed, smooth delivery in a conversational style**__.  || Rehearsed, smooth delivery.  || Appears unrehearsed with uneven delivery.  || Delivery is hesitant, and choppy and sounds like the presenter is reading.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || **__Highly effective enunciation and presenter's speech is clear and intelligible, not distant and muddled. Expression, and rhythm keep the audience listening.__** || Enunciation, expression, pacing are effective throughout the podcast.  || Enunciation, expression, rhythm are sometimes distracting during the podcast.  || Enunciation of spoken word is distant and muddled and not clear. Expression and rhythm are distracting throughout the podcast.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || Correct grammar is used throughout the podcast.  || __** Correct grammar is used during most of the podcast.  **__ || Occasionally incorrect grammar is used during the podcast.  || Poor grammar is used throughout the podcast.  ||^   ||
 * ** Graphic and Music Enhancements ** || ** 3 points ** || ** 2 points ** || ** 1 points ** || ** 0 points ** || ||
 * ^  || __** Music enhances the mood, quality, and understanding of the presentation.  **__ || Music provides supportive background to the podcast.  || Music provides somewhat distracting background to the podcast.  || Music is distracting to presentation.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || __** All music enhancements are owned by the creator of the podcast or copyright cleared with appropriate documentation.  **__ || Music enhancements are owned by the creator of the podcast or copyright cleared.  || Use of copyrighted works is questionable.  || Copyright infringement is obvious.  ||^   ||
 * ** Technical Production ** || ** 3 points ** || ** 2 points ** || ** 1 points ** || ** 0 points ** || ||
 * ^  || **__ Presentation is recorded in a quiet environment without background noise and distractions.  __** || Presentation is recorded in a quiet environment with minimal background noise and distractions.  || Presentation is recorded in a semi-quiet environment with some background noise and distractions.  || Presentation is recorded in a noisy environment with constant background noise and distractions.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || **__ Transitions are smooth and spaced correctly without noisy, dead space.  __** || Transitions are smooth with a minimal amount of ambient noise.  || Transitions are uneven with inconsistent spacing; ambient noise is present.  || Transitions are abrupt and background noise needs to be filtered.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || **__ Volume of voice, music, and effects enhance the presentation.  __** || Volume is acceptable.  || Volume is occasionally inconsistent.  || Volume changes are highly distracting.  ||^   ||
 * ^  || **__ Podcast length keeps the audience interested and engaged.  __** || Podcast length keeps audience listening.  || Podcast length is somewhat long or somewhat short to keep audience engaged.  || Podcast is either too long or too short to keep the audience engaged.  ||^   ||
 * ** TOTAL POINTS ** || 41/57